A's versre//rap1

They may think crazy while they are lying there lazy
That a little true maby But yes also i feel pain
Its like a crasing plain  but i keep fight ing thats all i do
Ifi dont i will die this is my pain  and in the it will bring me fame
I got no shame  i am ready to take all the blame
i wil fight you will never break me down
you can hit me bite me
push me in the grond let me bleed and turn me in the ground
thats were i did found  my power to never break
iit will make your bones shake

yeah yes im  lost  
because all the pain my life has cost
This is not a usually post  its a rap
im like a adepter all the pain flows in me  
i shout it out  all those words will never leave my mouth
im afarid off the croud  they shock when they hear my mouth
is all this pain maby imy fault  im caught in a cloud
a cloud inmy mind only theat voice that keeps talking
in my mind i am fighting tryin
to find my way out
out of this cloud inmy mind te way do i wanna find
the way that shined is th one i have to find

Bravo. A bit of rewording and it will flow exceedingly smoothly.